PLEASE SHRED MY RESUME APART

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I would like you guys help me tear apart my resume! Feel free to be as honest as possible. Note however that, since I am a WSO newbie, I cannot upload files or images. Therefore, please focus on content rather than format. And also, since there is nothing I can do about my editing experiences, please focus on grammar, relevance etc. rather than personal achievements.

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Hermione Granger [email protected] Adress, State, Country Phone number

EDUCATION European target 1 City, Country Bachelor of Science in Business and Economics - Finance and Management Class of 2020 • Cumulative GPA: 4.45/5.0 • Relevant Coursework: Management and Operations, Strategy and Integrated Economics, Statistics, Corporate Finance, Investment Management

European target 2 Exchange semester • Specializations in Management and Finance

WORK EXPERIENCE E-commerce firm X Summer Accountant and Business Controller City, Country June 2018 – Aug 2018 • Applied accounting principles when working with accounts payable and accounts receivable • Analyzed key financial numbers of the firm (EBITDA margins, sales, total inventory) and financial statements • Performed sales forecasting and budgeting • Contributed to minimization of the firm’s distribution costs by reviewing their supply chain and supplier negotiation standards

Angel investment firm Y City, Country Spring Intern City, Country March 2018 – Apr 2018 • Investigated new startups and their future prospects • Used financial models in Excel and other digital tools to assess the future potential of new firms • Sent out investment offers to and kept contact with numerous angel investors in order for them to provide my assigned startups with capital

EXTRACURRICULAR MBB – Program name City, Country Participant in program Apr 2018 – May 2018 • Selected as one of 30 students in Sweden to participate in a case competition with the purpose of finding a strategy that would help solve environmental issues in the Baltic Sea • Kept contact with consultants at the firm, who continuously assisted my team and I when solving our case • Presented a solution of the to a jury of consultants • Enhanced my understanding of and interest in the consulting industry

European target – Society Z (Business Committee) City, Country Head of events Sep 2017 – Apr 2018 • Contacted inspiring entrepreneurs to present their visions related to entrepreneurship in various lectures offered to students at the school Selected as one of 30 students in Sweden to participate in a case competition • Successfully arranged numerous lectures including preparatory work such as catering and marketing assistance on social media

SKILLS AND INTERESTS Language skills: Native in x, Fluent in English, Conversational Skills in y, Basic Skills in z Computer: Proficient in Excel, Proficient in PowerPoint, Basic Knowledge in SPSS Interests: Running, Reading, Travelling

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