PLEASE SHRED MY RESUME APART

Hi!

I would like you guys help me tear apart my resume! Feel free to be as honest as possible. Note however that, since I am a WSO newbie, I cannot upload files or images. Therefore, please focus on content rather than format. And also, since there is nothing I can do about my editing experiences, please focus on grammar, relevance etc. rather than personal achievements.

Cheers!

Hermione Granger
[email protected]
Adress, State, Country
Phone number

EDUCATION
European target 1
City, Country
Bachelor of Science in Business and Economics - Finance and Management
Class of 2020
• Cumulative GPA: 4.45/5.0
• Relevant Coursework: Management and Operations, Strategy and Integrated Economics, Statistics, Corporate
Finance, Investment Management

European target 2
Exchange semester
• Specializations in Management and Finance

WORK EXPERIENCE
E-commerce firm X
Summer Accountant and Business Controller
City, Country
June 2018 – Aug 2018
• Applied accounting principles when working with accounts payable and accounts receivable
• Analyzed key financial numbers of the firm (EBITDA margins, sales, total inventory) and financial statements
• Performed sales forecasting and budgeting
• Contributed to minimization of the firm’s distribution costs by reviewing their supply chain and supplier negotiation standards

Angel investment firm Y City, Country
Spring Intern
City, Country
March 2018 – Apr 2018
• Investigated new startups and their future prospects
• Used financial models in Excel and other digital tools to assess the future potential of new firms
• Sent out investment offers to and kept contact with numerous angel investors in order for them to provide my assigned startups with capital

EXTRACURRICULAR
MBB – Program name
City, Country
Participant in program
Apr 2018 – May 2018
• Selected as one of 30 students in Sweden to participate in a case competition with the purpose of finding a strategy that would help solve environmental issues in the Baltic Sea
• Kept contact with consultants at the firm, who continuously assisted my team and I when solving our case
• Presented a solution of the to a jury of consultants
• Enhanced my understanding of and interest in the consulting industry

European target – Society Z (Business Committee)
City, Country
Head of events
Sep 2017 – Apr 2018
• Contacted inspiring entrepreneurs to present their visions related to entrepreneurship in various lectures offered to students at the school Selected as one of 30 students in Sweden to participate in a case competition
• Successfully arranged numerous lectures including preparatory work such as catering and marketing assistance on social media

SKILLS AND INTERESTS
Language skills: Native in x, Fluent in English, Conversational Skills in y, Basic Skills in z
Computer: Proficient in Excel, Proficient in PowerPoint, Basic Knowledge in SPSS
Interests: Running, Reading, Travelling