Resume Advice - Non-MBB Consulting

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Just my personal thoughts:

• Your most recent experience has paragraph-length bullet points. Try to cover each bullet point in less than 3 lines with a what, how, why, and the result (add some #s to make it even better).
• Get rid of periods.
• "20xx - present." Capitalize the P.
• Don't know why that "Appeared before..." line is there. Irrelevant filler as it shows no result. Get rid of lines like this and add more depth.
• Add an Interests section.
• GPA?

I am not fond of the little bit of fancy font, some may be turned off by it. Consider something more conservative.

The very first thing I noticed is how you formatted your bullets under your most recent experience. You have one bullet, then the actual contents in several bullets under that single bullet. Don't use a single bullet, its either 2+ or none. Eliminate that first bullet, move the actual content over the same way you have your other experience and see how it looks. In my opinion it will look better.

I also echo the above advice.

Version 3 attached.

*Coochie - I was trying to save the 'how' and 'why' parts of my most recent experience for cover letters. Bad idea? And the 'appeared before line' - they were all pre-trial hearings, i.e. nothing of consequence ever came of them; am just trying to show I wasn't a total shitbag....

*Surething, I've seen consulting resumes in my old format; wasn't sure if that was acceptable or not.