Resume critique/job advice for an ambitious nontarget!

I'm entering my second semester at a non target in NYC, but I am graduating in 2017 because I did a year of college in high school so I am a sophomore. My main goal is BB IB/ER but I am really open to other finance positions as long is it presents me with good recruiting/business school potential and high pay. I currently work at a VC firm, I plan on staying for a year maybe two and I'm getting really great experience there, would it be possible to leverage my VC experience into a buy side firm out of undergrad?

Based off my resume, what kinds of opportunities do you think would be in reach for me?

P.S.: I know the bullets are messed up for the first job, I can't fix it right now so ignore it!

P.S.S.: The little blurb where I justify my GPA that was just for my WSO resume not on my actual resume