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Nits: - keep it consistent whether you put periods at the end of your bullets (you have for main bullets and third tier bullets, but not for second tier bullets - is this because these bullets are more like prose? That's actually fine too.) - Put a line-break before Skills and Interests (similar format to Education) - Select transaction experience - for last deal, consider writing out "three" instead of "3" for "...modeled three alternative capital structures..." (I personally think it looks better to spell out quantities less than ten) - Private Equity Firm - you say $15 million instead of $15MM (keep your style consistent) - assuming you were deliberately generic in your interests, otherwise give more detail
Otherwise, this actually looks pretty good.
All solid points - thanks for the review.
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