Resume Review for FT Search
Hey guys So I am still looking for a FT job. I started to intern at this boutique this semester to improve my resume. I updated my resume and was hoping for some input.
http://www.razume.com/documents/18946
Thanks in advance for the help guys.
Could be formatted to look more bold and professional. Layout is rather plain.
Dean's List is oddly floating in the middle of a bullet?
Your date spacing is not consistent.
You end some sentences with periods. Again, consistency. You blacked out your heading, but I would imagine you also have uniformity problems there too.
You use the word "Led" too many times.
I would lessen the number of bullet points in certain areas by combining and verbally strengthening some of the weaker bullets.
Many resumes include dates for their activities to give some context for how long you have been involved.
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You awkwardly repeat "current" twice in a sentence.
"Succeed in netting in" is awkward also.
No interests are listed, but you have the heading.
Obviously a ton of minor issues, but once those are fixed I would spend most of your time focusing on really strengthening and consolidating the bullet details.
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