ROAST MY RESUME/CV, applying for summer internships next year

Currently preparing my CV for summer internships, I did not get any spring weeks so I am worried my CV is not good enough, please be brutally honest. I am also trying to get an internship at a search fund this summer to add to the CV
This resume needs a lot of work, particularly the bullet points. Go to your school's career office or more senior members in your organizations and ask them to help you out, since this looks like it might be your first Uni CV. That's okay, but it's not ready to be looked at here yet. Some points:
For the love of God, don't mention WSO on your resume.
Remove relevant modules, secondary school activities & societies. Remove "by a current Citi BA".
Combine IBsociety roles & timeframe into one line.
Your bullets are too much like sentences and use lots of fillers like "the" and "gave and other extraneous info.
Good first try and good luck!
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