SA resume - what do you guys think?

I attend a a non-target, GPA will be a 3.7+ after this upcoming semester (one class that I bombed is weighing it down, so I have to retake it).

The two internships are w/ a small PE shop and a nationwide discount stockbroker (not exactly investment banking related, but it's finance).

Let me know what you think.

http://www.razume.com/documents/18078

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Dr Joe

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You have a period at the end of Relevant Coursework but not at the end of Honors
Rearrange bullet points under your current internship - I think the 2nd point is much more impressive than the 1st.
The 1st bullet point about the library - 1st bullet way too long. Last sentence not grammatically correct - amount of documents can not be 10,000 pages - size of documents can be.
2nd bullet point - "our analyst" - sounds funny. Also, you worked with him to figure out how a balance sheet works? Acct101?
2nd experience - did you actually sell products to prospective clients?
Bullets/indenting looks funny on the 2nd bullet point
Mathematica looks funny next to other languages
Get cooking off your resume
Get references available off your resume

good luck

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noke2012

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Thanks!

One thing, by "Mathematica looks funny next to the other languages," what do you mean? It's under Languages and Technical Skills. Do you recommend I give a Technical Skills its own line? I thought about getting rid of it completely, but mastering mathematica was a huge pain in the ass that took a lot of work, so I figured I might as well mention it.

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