Senior resume - feedback please

Hello, guys.

I want to receive some constructive feedbacks on my resume.
I am willing to receive any blunt remarks. Impervious to any comments.
Please point out any mistakes or something that could be improved.

Thanks.

http://www.razume.com/documents/13427

 

First off - at most major banks, recruiting for full time finished a while ago.

Be prepared to answer why you're not going back to the firm that you interned at. Were you offered a position? Was it an issue with fit?

Leave off annualized returns. As a retail investor, you can typically only bet in limited products and typically long only. It's very easy to get a 46+% return if you went long risk in march. It doesn't really speak to skill. Also, remember IB & S&T are different. Bankers don't day trade and have tough restrictions on what they can/cannot buy.

 
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