SB(s) for a thorough, thoughtful critique.
http://www.razume.com/documents/18679
My main concerns are as follows:
Transaction experience headers: My wording seems awkward to me. Can't use names since none of my more noteworthy transactions have closed. Specifically, I'm unsure how to describe the companies involved in the transactions. e.g. 'Major Public Airline', 'Low Cost Airline', 'Diversified Travel Company'. Better to say simply "Airline', 'Airline', 'Travel Company'?
For the M&A transaction, am I correct to include the implied transaction value?
Case Study - Get rid of it? Obviously not transaction experience butt was a good exercise. I put it together a day or 2 after the merger was announced, circulated internally (company-wide) first, then to clients.
Thanks so much for your time.
Your resume is in English... Why would you note that you are fluent in English?
I really hate that resume format. It looks like a total mess.
haha, fluent in English. You should also mention that you can walk and even read.
going to agree, your resume seems so busy/hard to follow
May I ask if your transferring from a MM-->BB?
I based this off of a template for lateral hires that I found on the internet and it had the fluent in english line. Dumb of me to leave it. Maybe somebody can point me toward a cleaner format for a 1 page, [semi] experienced analyst resume?
is that the format from m&i?
Too busy, needs more white space, better off leaving out the 'potential' transaction to free up space so you can separate your items by bullet points rather than semi colons.
Wannabe - it is.
AVP - thanks. but note that they're all 'potential' or 'pending'
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