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Feel free to comment on readability, content, formatting, anything you see. Keep in mind, I was pretty loose with formatting as I was changing names and etc.
The cramped square bullets are making the whole resume hard to read.
The expected graduation date is not aligned either. Little details like this are easy to spot and will kill you, especially an annoyed, tired Analyst.
Consider spacing everything out. IB experience looks good though.
Thank you!
You have an indent at "comparables" which looks odd and I would take it out. Otherwise you're good to go.
Thank you very much! Will change that immediately.
Looking good
Some minor stuff, similar to what posters above have commented on.
This hyphen is technically correct but looks weird because of the dash you used on every other date (xx -- Present). This hyphen should be a dash I think it should be analysis rather than analyses. This would be consistent with the other items in the list, which are singular.Again, looking good, just trying to nitpick you a bit.
Thank you very much! Will work on these, Nitpick away.
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