Anyone here who went through the UCAS process with a few minutes to spare?

I'm a US HS senior applying to a few UK schools, was wondering if someone could look over my personal statement. 

I looked at a few examples from the TheStudentRoom and had my college counselor look over it, but was wondering if anyone from the UK could take a quick look at it! Would be much appreciated, I'm not really sure what I'm doing haha. 

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