Need Urgent Review: FT Consulting, PWM

From a quick glance: 1) Wayyyy too much info on your consulting internship. Nobody is going to read all that. Trim it down a lot. 2) Publications should not be its own section 3) If you need to fill up some space after trimming down the internship, make your header different (i.e. address on separate line from phone, email) and add some spacing between your experiences

sounds like mckinsey which is incredible - especially for wealth management i think as long as you have a decent interview you can get into whatever you want.

• You have periods after some month's abbreviations and not others. I'd spell them all out, as June should not be abbreviated to three letters (neither should July or May), which makes consistency difficult

-If the consulting firm is MBB, I disagree that there is too much. Also, I feel it is fine for publications to be its own section, as long as they are reputable journals

-I'd cut out (former high school player)

It looks pretty good though, you should easily get interviews for PWM, which is the main point of a resume

quick observation:

WAY TOO MUCH IN CONSULTING>>>>CHOP CHOP CHOP! Dean's List: How many times? keep base ball (from high school) only if you consider it a major achievement.

I think the "& Company" gives it away. Can't see you having any problems with landing interviews with McKinsey on your resume.

No further comments, in which case this was a pointless post.