Please help review my Resume for Private Wealth Management ..

grammatical & spelling errors, WAY to long, confused about your education

I've been told that reading the Economist and FT and travelling really makes ones resume stand out.

use mergers and inquisitions template and post on razume first.....also dont list your courses the education section is too long....

Try to cut it to one page on a Microsoft Office Document as this is the typical length of an undergrad resume. PWM professionals will generally spend no more than 30 seconds looking at a resume so you need to be more detailed in your approach. Cut out everything that does not have to do with meaningful accomplishments/tasks/projects in your work experience (get rid of professional approach, listening carefully on phone calls, etc.) Cut down your experience descriptions to 3-5 bullet points each.

If you do that and cut out your courses (echoing r12) your resume will look vastly more professional.

Id recommend using the WSO resume review. It's not free, but then again nothing good ever is.

Would also appreciate suggestions on which points under each role I should eliminate..thanks