Hey everyone,
Can you please critique the attached CV? It is not mine, but from someone who wants to enter PWM or Asset Management and wants some feedback on the CV the person intends to send out to various places.
Thanks in advance!
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I would never use the verb "participated" on a resume. It sounds wayy too much like the truth.
Can you please give me a suggestion how to formulate it better?
Collaborated with fund managers....result Co-led xyz project with fund managers....result
"Participated in meetings" just sounds like they sat there taking notes and got nothing from it. Talking about results is key. Also, he/she could quantify it a bit more.
Thanks, much appreciated! :)
Anyone else?
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