Critique My Resume - all valid feedback is welcome

Hello Everyone,

So, since the SA 18 apps are starting to open and I would like to start sending out my application but before I do so I wanna get some feedback on my resume.

I am sure this forum will be a great place to get some feedback from as we have all level of people. I have a solid story on why I went to non-target.
Reason 1 - received full scholarship at the university
Reason 2 - can't go out of state supporting my family.

I am currently interning at F500 company. All positive and negative feedback are welcome.

https://www.docdroid.net/yifPIJY/monkey-mcchimp.p…

Thank you.

 

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