I will be applying for summer internships at the(JPMC, Goldman, MS) and the elite boutiques (Rothchilds, ) in the Autumn. I'm looking for constructive criticism to my CV.
In particular, I would be interested in which bullet points are weakest and could be removed. I'm hoping to get some more leadership experience to add to my CV. I also want each bullet point to add value - if a bullet point does not add value, it makes the CV look less mature.
I'd be really interested hearing from Analysts whether (if they received my CV) they would want to read the cover letter or offer an interview. If not, how can the CV be improved for next year? Where do you think the weaknesses are (is it the structure or achievements).
I will be applying for. Please be brutal.