Destroy this resume

Can you guys rip apart this resume and help me restructure it for i-banking internship purposes?

http://www.razume.com/documents/21186

A little bit of background information:

The PWM internship listed was done in my hometown... small and very unknown boutique consulting firm.

I am from a target.

I am seeking an internship this upcoming Sophomore year.

Questions:

Should I apply for the fall semester or the spring semester? I plan on cold calling and networking hardcore.

Should I be looking for an IB internship or should I try and find another PWM internship at a more distinguished bank?

And of course, do you have any suggestions to help my resume?

Thanks WSO, you guys have been a huge help so far and you never fail to disappoint.

-AZ

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Best Response

Increase the font size and move all your crap over to the left. Way too much white space. I'd say look into those internship programs they offer rising juniors I think UBS, GS and other BB have

-Take out Texas Hold'em you sound like a dam child...It seems like you play in an orchestra so put down your interest in classical music, jazz etc, what ever...Honestly make your interest sound like your are Renaissance Man so you can relate to everyone...

-If you can't interview entirely in Spanish or Chinese take it out...they will call you out on this and make you interview in a different language

-Bullet points dont need periods

I'd say pretty good though...

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