Please give some constructive criticisms for my draft cover letter for a female in finance IB programme
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Career Resources
Career Advancement Opportunities
August 2026 Investment Banking
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Evercore 01 99.5%
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Moelis & Company 01 98.9%
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JPMorgan 01 98.4%
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Morgan Stanley 08 97.8%
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Goldman Sachs 02 97.3%
Overall Employee Satisfaction
August 2026 Investment Banking
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Moelis & Company No 99.5%
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Evercore No 98.9%
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Morgan Stanley 01 98.4%
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Banco Santander 02 97.8%
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BMO Capital Markets 12 97.3%
Professional Growth Opportunities
August 2026 Investment Banking
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Evercore 01 99.5%
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Moelis & Company 01 98.9%
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Morgan Stanley 06 98.4%
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Goldman Sachs 01 97.8%
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JPMorgan No 97.3%
Total Avg Compensation
August 2026 Investment Banking
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Vice President (16) $429
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Associates (50) $259
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3rd+ Year Analyst (8) $210
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2nd Year Analyst (25) $178
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Intern/Summer Associate (14) $159
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1st Year Analyst (84) $151
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Intern/Summer Analyst (75) $101
16 IB Interviews Notes
“... there’s no excuse to not take advantage of the resources out there available to you. Best value for your $ are the...”
Leaderboard
| 1 | |
99.2 |
| 2 | |
99.0 |
| 3 | |
99.0 |
| 4 | |
99.0 |
| 5 | |
98.9 |
| 6 | |
98.9 |
| 7 |  |
98.9 |
| 8 | |
98.9 |
| 9 |  |
98.9 |
| 10 | |
98.8 |
From 10 rejections to 1 dream investment banking internship
“... I believe it was the single biggest reason why I ended up with an offer...”
I think it sounds too stilted as well
lol your name is Goldman but your cover letter is BAML
If I were a recruiter + WSO user, I would ask "which firm do you prefer?"
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