Cover Letter Review - From a semi-target

I was hoping I could get some feedback on my cover letter. I'm from a semi-target so I didn't copy/paste the one's that are floating around. Thanks for your time and help

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wf8ZEaw5ahaQz…

 

I'm not entirely sure how you'd accomplish this, but your cover letter as a whole seems very stilted and forced... Perhaps you should use more transitions.

 

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