I was hoping I could get some feedback on my cover letter. I'm from a semi-target so I didn't copy/paste the one's that are floating around. Thanks for your time and help
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I'm not entirely sure how you'd accomplish this, but your cover letter as a whole seems very stilted and forced... Perhaps you should use more transitions.
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thanks a lot for the feedback.
I've updated it. It's a bit more run of the mill but I'd rather leave it at that instead of screwing up.
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