Looks good Mr non-target. I feel the section on your hedge fund experience too wordy. It's six dot points and full of long sentences and I lost track when I got up to the third line. I'm not getting useful information when you're writing so much. I would cut it down to three dot points or so and definitely consolidate your first two points.
Right-align your headers and remove italics on the dates. Both unnecessary and make the right side of the resume cluttered.
Too much content on hedge fund experience. Also, try to quantify it even more if possible. It captures the eyes or hiring managers.
Why is there two dates for "finance society"? Pick one.
More interests you sound like a nerd when I look at your resume. People like to be able to relate to the person they are interviewing. Otherwise, very impressive resume.
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You started interning at a PE firm when you were in HS?
Looks good Mr non-target. I feel the section on your hedge fund experience too wordy. It's six dot points and full of long sentences and I lost track when I got up to the third line. I'm not getting useful information when you're writing so much. I would cut it down to three dot points or so and definitely consolidate your first two points.
Otherwise looks great, good luck for recruitment.
Looks pretty good. Maybe interest section write a bit more. Or your school activities expand on what you did.
just make sure you know your shit cold. you designed models, drafted books, created buyout models and remodeled all before your junior year.
You sound legit on paper, but if you aren't even close to any of this fluff you will not even make it to round 2.
just make sure you know your shit cold. you designed models, drafted books, created buyout models and remodeled all before your junior year.
You sound legit on paper, but if you aren't even close to any of this fluff you will not even make it to round 2.
Right-align your headers and remove italics on the dates. Both unnecessary and make the right side of the resume cluttered.
Too much content on hedge fund experience. Also, try to quantify it even more if possible. It captures the eyes or hiring managers.
Why is there two dates for "finance society"? Pick one.
More interests you sound like a nerd when I look at your resume. People like to be able to relate to the person they are interviewing. Otherwise, very impressive resume.
Too long to read. I wont read it if it is not a Big Name
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