Critique my CV

A VP at a energy firm asked me to send him a copy of my cv today but I would like to get some constructive feedback before I do.On the current cv I only have aspects of my jobs that are relevant to IB as i am looking for an M&A role in energy or mining.
http://www.razume.com/documents/23897
Thank you in advance.

 

Move Education to the top. Get rid of Windows XP and Office in your Skill. Try to be more specific with the interests. Like say the locations that you have bungee jumped at for example.

 

I thought education was to be kept on top only when still in school or when you only have an undergrad degree.Can you explain your rationale behind asking to move it on the top of the cv? Thanks for your other comments.

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