12 Hour Resume Smash

Hi All

I will be submitting this CV within 24 hours.

I am applying for an internal transfer within my company. I currently work in the finance and accounting department and am looking to move into the business development (mergers/ takeovers) department.

If you could please just absolutely smash my resume with anything you think looks stupid or with any improvements that would be amazing.

Appreciate any comments.

Cheers

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