Another Resume Review - Wording sound elementary?
http://www.razume.com/documents/11078
Shat on my resume. SOme of the wording sounds elementary, suggestions?
Thanks in advance!
http://www.razume.com/documents/11078
Shat on my resume. SOme of the wording sounds elementary, suggestions?
Thanks in advance!
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Maybe make seperate sections for work experience and related experience so you can keep the investment intern stuff above the server job.
I could be wrong here, but you probably don't need the description under server, that is stuff pretty much every waiter does IMO the title is self explanatory. You could use the extra space to build out the more relevant sections, like your internship
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