Anyone want to look at my resume and give me some insight?

I haven't updated my resume in over a year which is bad for me.

Now that recruiting season is near, I want to make sure that my resume is in tip top shape so I can put my best foot forward. Any sort of help will be much appreciated.

Anyone want to check it out and critique it for me? SB's for advice!

Thanks in advance.

PS. I take criticism well, so you don't have to sugar coat anything haha

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I would put some numbers on there. Virtually every trade assistant on the planet has these responsibilities. Adding numbers shows why you are special and deserve consideration. The more of this you can do the better.

e.g. 1. instead of 'Create daily market research reports that are to be sent to clients' try this 'Create daily market research reports on firms with annual revenues above $XYZ million that are to be sent to clients that comprise ABC% of our business' 2. instead of 'Research and create new hedging strategies' try this 'Research and create new hedging strategies over XYZ time period at risk level ABC'

 

I'll try to incorporate something like that. I guess I should probably include in there that our clientele makes up 80% of the grains business in Israel..

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Bullet point formatting is kind of weird. Try 3-4 bullets of 1 line length for each experience. Other than that, not bad.

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