Bruce Wayne's Resume
Hi,
This is Bruce Wayne's Resume...What do you think about it? Could Bateman be able to land interviews at BB with that?
Thank you for your suggestions (format, content (work experience, education...), language and so on...)
Definitely looks better. A few things:
Your name is actually a bit too big - drop it a few points - you want it substantially bigger than the other text, but right now it overwhelms over half the page.
Take out the start date for your education
Your sentence structure is improved, but still needs a little work (punching up, rephrasing), especially in your oldest experience.
"Deejaying" and "Psychology" should not be capitalized. Also, "nutrition" on its own, sounds a bit odd - are you interested in becoming a nutritionist, eating well - I would probably cut it and just leave physical fitness.
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