Commodity analyst - resume check

Hi there,

I’m looking for feedback on my CV and would appreciate any insights you might have

A bit of background info: I currently work as an analyst at a physical shop, where I started as a 'generalist' for the physical traders and board members of our parent company (retail) but have - over the past two years - been focusing more on providing trade recommendations to our paper traders.

My goal is to transition to a larger trading company (e.g., Gunvor, Trafigura, etc.) or a hedge fund, whether small or large—whichever aligns with my skills and experience.

Thanks so much!