Alright guys, just went through and updated my resume, please tear this F%cker apart.
All criticisms and critiques welcome.
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why is your leadership above experience? do msf students fight for the same SA positions as ugrad juniors? looks pretty competitive to me
You really should add interests and remove scholarships.
I agree that work experience should be before leadership. You should also have a technical skills section under the additional information. Also maybe you can find another action verb instead of repeating "assist"
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