Consulting Resume: Please Critique

I'll be graduating from a semi-target in Europe in the beginning of June, after which I'll take a gap year and hopefully enroll in a target Masters in management program next fall. The long-term goal? To eventually work in management consulting at a top firm.

Unfortunately, I've not had much luck with getting a relevant internship for this summer. I'm not letting that stop me, though: I'm continuing my efforts through extensive networking (lots of informational interviews) until something pans out. I've already received quite a lot of help with my resume from friends who managed to get full-time offers at either a BB or MBB with similar profiles, but I'd like to hear the input from WSO. Give me your best shot and don't take it easy on me. I'll return the favor when I have more experience.

Edit: Link removed. Thanks for the help.