Critique my CV Went to Reddit, but it wasn't helpful... First year undergrad in finance.

Hi there! 

So as the title says, Reddit doesn't help much... This is my curriculum vitae, it's NOT my resume. Yes, my resume is one page long. I'm mostly concerned of the job/experience description... Is my use of english correct? 

I'm applying for RBC, and they emphasis on engagement, athletes and extracurricular activities. Are there any typos that I didn't see? 

Thank you so much for your help, your time and critiques! 

2 Comments
 

Am I tripping? What the fuck is the difference between a resume and a CV? They mean the same thing where I live. And if you have a 1-page one, why do you want the 2-page one reviewed? Submit the one-pager!

Pick a tense for your bullet points and stick with it - you regularly switch between present and past tense in the first word.

Also I'd remove some identifying info about where you work, it took all of 90 seconds to find your LinkedIn

 

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