Critique my Resume - Preparing to do the impossible.

I know it will take a hell of a lot of work for me to land a position in NYC finance, but that is my end game goal and I am set to work my ass off. That being said a good start is reviewing over my resume. I figured people here would have a pretty good idea on what I might need to change or adjust.

Be as harsh as is required.

 

Remove your periods at the end of each dotpoint

And your university club should either be with your work and leadership experience or just outright removed - the location and period you're there adds 0 value

 

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