Hey guys,
I'm going to a networking event tomorrow and really want to fix up my resume. I've made some serious changes, but I feel like the wordings of a couple of lines are a bit weird. Can anyone offer some advice on the overall resume (format, any weird things you spot), but also some comments on the lines that I've made bold? I feel like they're very poorly/awkwardly phrased, but can't find a better way to phrase them.
Thanks!
EDIT: I've found an error where the "Te" in "Texas Hold 'Em" is italicized and have already fixed it. Sorry for that, please ignore it.
Also, I'm aware of the alignment issue on the right side with the cities and dates, working on it now.
EDIT: I've fixed it, but haven't uploaded the new copy, as I'm making other changes, and the PDF converter site I use requires me to wait a while before converting again.
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Even if you play video games it's generally not a good idea to list them on your resume. The border on clubs is still thicker but I see why you bolded it. As for your points think about your achievements and how they affected productivity or efficiency.
E.g. "Conducted qualitative analysis on potential investments using SWOT and Porter’s 5 forces analysis" What was the result? How did you participate? What sort of qualitative analysis were you doing and for what reason? Think about it from someone else's perspective. Would they be able to understand what you did just by reading the point? Just something to think about.
Lotta highschool stuff on there.
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I would want to fix that.
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