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your bank and clothing company have bullets that lead in well, but the national utility company bullets use passive language. You need to use Developed in place of Development of, or TESTED instead of team member of the testing team.
Thanks for the feedback William, appreciate it.
Make sure you don't mention your BB SA position was back office! Haha
It's not exactly "Back Office", it's in a revenue generating division but not part of the traditional 3 front offices areas of IB. Considering I'm going into my penultimate year and applying for a summer analyst IB position surely it can't be that bad? I'm not applying to a FT program.
Yeah I was kind of kidding around. I'm sure you'll be fine, and definitely be as descriptive as possible.
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