[Edited: Take Two] Please help me with my resume!

Hello,

I go to a semi-target university. I'm currently a sophomore and still looking for an internship for the summer. I would appreciate any type of advice!

Thank you!
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Edit:
Hi again,

I took the advice and tried to correct the grammatical errors. Sorry about that. Could you guys take another look? Would you guys still recommend the $200 resume review service that WSO offers? Has anyone tried it? I'm definitely considering it but I still want to fix most of the errors that I can fix.

Thanks!

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