European Undergraduate /// applying for off-cycle internships autumn 2010 /// FEEDBACK NEEDED
Hi I am a European Undergraduate who wants to apply for off-cycle BB internships. I have no real previous finance experience and would highly appreciate any kind of feedback on:
- how competetive my application is?
- where I need to improve?
- any other points...
My resume is here: http://www.razume.com/documents/14037
Thanks a lot in advance guys!
Good resume, but your interests sound so douchy. Sorry I had to say it. Golf, wine & dine, what the fuck, are you old money or what? Don't forget to mention that you only drink Dom Ruinart Blanc de blancs '96.
old money playing snooker? yeah right.
Thanks for the feedback!!
Well, not exactly, in continental Europe snooker/golf have not so much to do with old money, but are quite "new" sports here!
But I definitely see your point and will replace snooker/wine&dine with something that sounds less snobby... basically I wanted to convey that I like to cook and eat together with friends, sometimes also with a bottle of wine. I've screened several CV's (from non-native speakers) and noticed that it is quite popular to write "wine&dine" for this (at least I thought so).
wtf?
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