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For each bullet point, you shouldn't just say what you did, but what the end result was (try to quantify this). The one about managing the virtual cash account is a good example. You did well, but how much did you turn that 100k into. You developed a directory of contact information. Fine. How did it help, how did it improve efficiency, what was special about it? I would suggest to focus on these aspects and try to make each point into a mini-story about a time when you excelled in something that is relevant and desirable to your potential employer.
Thank you very much Corp. Anyone else?
The organizations that you list seem like Resume Booster clubs and not actually meaningful because you don't explain any of it. Also, your resume gives off a very nerdy and try-hard vibe.
Thank you, that is exactly what I'm going for.
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