Freshman Non-Target Resume

[quote=Waymon3x6]Guys, I just completed my freshman year and put together this resume. What do you guys think?

Thanks in advance!

http://www.razume.com/documents/26397[/quote]

Appreciate your enthusiasm, however..."exotic cars"?, you need to lose that. It seems very douchey or like a 13 year old. The personal investment portfolio section: how did you get $45,000 to invest to begin with? That would be the only thing I could think of if I saw that. Plus, you can't really buy fixed income without getting raped for less than a round lot ($100k). Travelled to x amount of countries...the mosaic is building of someone who may not be hungry or need to work. Kill all of that stuff that alludes to you already having money. In general, I don't think interests have a place on a resume (I do know many people disagree with that). But, who really cares what your out of work interests are? Not me.

Expand on Bryant Suites...how did you start this? How much money did you make (if impressive)?

that's a lot that youve done as a freshman!

Expand on the CIGNA role it looks good for FICC

Expand on the CIGNA role it looks good for FICC

Thanks guys, I appreciate your input!

I know who you are, at least I've heard about you.

not bad man, pretty solid just needs a few touch ups.

And a good friend of mine went to Avon Old Farms