GO IN ON MY RESUME PART 3
Hello everyone, this will probably be my last time posting about my Resume but I still want some feedback on what I could change and what I right now. I'm applying for a couple of Equity Research positions and resume is due on Friday. Thank you all for helping me update my Resume to be more competitive! https://imgur.com/a/M4OLw
Why is the MSU finance association under work experience? If you want to list it on your resume maybe chance leadership to leadership & extracurriculars and put it there. The first bullet under that also sounds a bit awkward, and make "Finance" lowercase. I also don't know if you should keep those numbers under the stock competition there, because 80% return over 2 months is pretty ridiculous and means you made some high risk gambles but since it's a simulator you might be okay to leave it. Lowercase "Finance" on the third bullet of that.
Why is the family restaurant under Leadership? That should be under work experience. How much did you grow the social media accounts? Could be good to quantify. Did anything come about talking to prospective clients to carry your products? Also you used perspective, but that's incorrect - should be prospective. If it did maybe say something like "which resulted in the sale of our x to a carrier." "To keep everyone on the same page" sounds really informal, definitely fix that line up. How did you reduce employee turnover? Do you have any numbers as to what percentage of employee turnover has been reduced by?
Edit: Also take out Excel, PowerPoint and Word proficiency.
Okay thanks, I appreciate your feedback
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