Good day

center name, address, contact info

part with grades is difficult to read due to the massive gap between label and grades / dates

skimmed the internship bullets, seems mostly good, like the organization there

this part made me eyeroll a bit: "Entered over 80 customers’ information into Excel spreadsheets, making it easier for senior management to organize and analyze data" re: the "senior management" bit

in the lists at the bottom don't use bullets in the middle of the line, replace with semicolons or something

I would stop after computer skills. The line below computer skills should be used in an interview when they ask about your strengths. But that is just my opinion. Actions speak louder than words.

"Founder and CFO of $5 million company"

what does this mean, and why would you be trying to "break into iBanking"

Why not put your entrepreneurial stuff in your work experience, considering it's a $5mil company? Take out the 2 club membership, or put them somewhere else if you wish, for they don't belong in the leadership section

Founder of $5 million company? But its a "simulator"...

I don't understand... so it is a fake $5 million? Makes no sense...

THX

I think you should add a summary under bank of china if you are going to do it for the 2 other companies you interned/worked for

Your work experience needs to be dated chronologically starting from the latest work you had.

also, don't be silly just to mention "summer"

add correct dates (month year - month year/present) format

I'm still curious for an explanation for this virtual company.