Help Entry Level Recent Grad (Resume Touch ups)

Removed contact info from top, need to calculate GPA or equivalent (Canadian, university does not supply GPA) In process of doing so.

http://www.razume.com/documents/21517

I am looking to enter the financial industry, analysis, research, ideally trading but open to anything. Please give me some feedback and comments on my Resume to help make it better.

Editted thanks for your posts and PM so far hope to get more

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I don't know what's more exciting than creating Optimus Prime.

Under my tutelage, you will grow from boys to men. From men into gladiators. And from gladiators into SWANSONS.
 

Investing a lot on my personal account, has been my primary source of income surpassing that of working at the hotel. This is going to be part of my weaknesses to overcome, perhaps not the brightest ideas however I have learned a lot on the year off, I am now ready to enter the workforce and am done with the break. Did some brief travelling as well, visiting parts of Asia and Europe.

 

I am relatively new to these forums and didn't think it would be a big deal, but then again you never know who is online. Problem should be fixed now, thank-you for the genuine heads up :-)

 

If you know anything like your sharpe ratio or your level of diversification those numbers might be decent to put it. The more numbers the better. Also, at the bottom create a section for activities. Highlight athletics and any clubs you were in here.

"Ambition and education is first and talent is second"- T.I.
 

Thanks for the conversion and opinions everyone, very much appreciated. Any "wording" that should be changed around that are clearly red flags? Wanting this as perfect as it can be given my experience thus far!

Will see if I can find my Sharpe Ratio, I am pretty sure I have this available too me (remember calculating it for a school project) :-)

 

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