Help me with Resume
Needing some help with my resume. Not getting any responses from anywhere. Unsure if to keep or remove GPA since its low. Had an interview and they my degree as Business Admin and was sort of confused. Should I remove the Business Admin and just put Finance? Also I have heard mixed reviews on putting on objective, but I leaned towards no objective. Any feedback is appreciated.
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I have networked a little but I guess just not enough. So I will work on that a little harder. My school is a non-target with no banks who do any OCR. The best companies we have are Lockheed Martian and Siemens. I have also uploaded a PDF of my resume.
Buddy my nontarget barely had OCR for anything (but it did recruit for Panda Express...no joke) so there's no excuse. Also I'm not sure how much research you've done but networking involves sending 500+ cold emails as outlined here. And I agree with the below, you don't have much relevant experience but there are ways you can spin your resume to make it seem like you've shown interest in the past. Go on M&I and read their resume articles since they help with the wording and how to display content without having three words per bullet - right now your resume tells me you're not comfortable with the English language
I did some editing to it and expanded on my accomplishments. Is the format acceptable?
Agree on the PDF point. You have to add some beef to this taco, too. I see you raised $50,000 for flood relief - what successes did you have in your other jobs? Rather than give me bland tasks, discuss them further (use more than 3 words per line).
I did some changes to it and uploaded it. Also I did find a template and used that.
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