Help me with Resume

Needing some help with my resume. Not getting any responses from anywhere. Unsure if to keep or remove GPA since its low. Had an interview and they my degree as Business Admin and was sort of confused. Should I remove the Business Admin and just put Finance? Also I have heard mixed reviews on putting on objective, but I leaned towards no objective. Any feedback is appreciated.

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  1. Put it up as a PDF because no one will open a word doc, myself included
  2. Don't omit the GPA. Judging by the sound of your post, it looks like you have not networked at all and unless you're a Harvard kid with a 4.0 GPA, cold dropping your resume (excluding OCR) isn't going to do anything for you
 

I have networked a little but I guess just not enough. So I will work on that a little harder. My school is a non-target with no banks who do any OCR. The best companies we have are Lockheed Martian and Siemens. I have also uploaded a PDF of my resume.

 
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Buddy my nontarget barely had OCR for anything (but it did recruit for Panda Express...no joke) so there's no excuse. Also I'm not sure how much research you've done but networking involves sending 500+ cold emails as outlined http://www.wallstreetoasis.com/forums/want-to-get-me-on-the-phone-heres…</a">here. And I agree with the below, you don't have much relevant experience but there are ways you can spin your resume to make it seem like you've shown interest in the past. Go on M&I and read their resume articles since they help with the wording and how to display content without having three words per bullet - right now your resume tells me you're not comfortable with the English language

 

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