Help resume for a french applicant (english grammar)

Hello everybody!

I am new on this awesome forum that I discovered a few weeks ago. I am French, working as a credit analyst and I am currently applying to work in London. I know that my english is not perfect, along with my resume.. I would be very grateful if you could help me to use to right verbs. Could you please indicate if a better verb suits in the sentence? (and of course if it is completely false).

This is for a current experience

1) Can we say "Manage financial projects " ?
2) Present the main deals to the board of directors
3) Rate the portfolio of clients

For a past experience

4) Completed financial audit of companies
5) Prepared credit application
6) can we use another verb instead of "performed" financial analysis of companies ?
7) Conducted research

Thank you so much in advance!

:)

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