i banking resume review

search before posting stupid shit like this.

1. You did not black out enough, I now know exactly who you are or could figure it out really easily.
2. Why would you list your major gpa before your cumulative gpa if your cumulative gpa is higher!? I just don't understand.

why is this stupid shit? try explaining yourself. i am perfectly open to criticism.

Post it on Razume so its easier to review. When you try to look at the picture you can't even see the entire image.

This is just my preference but one of the main things you want to convey with a resume is not only WHAT you did, but what your actions RESULTED in. I would try to incorporate more results into your resume.

For example: Created and presented account analysis of 8 privately managed portfolios valued at $xxx; resulted in xyz change in investments/ use of analysis by director in investment decision/ etc.

GPA should be out of 4.00, not 4.0.