IBD SA resume critique - SBs for help

Whats poppin, y'all

This is for IBD SA in London.

Having listened to your criticisms (in earlier thread) and tried to correct errors and make bullet points way more specific (and quantitative), here is the updated version:
http://www.razume.com/documents/28154
Note that a lot of text has been modified to hide identity

Criticism/comments/suggestions are very welcome. SB to all non-troll comments.

Also very interested to hear you guys' opinions on how good the resume is and whether I have a shot at BB front office. University is completely non-target, not terribly ranked though, and the best uni in the small european country, I'm from (not that anyone in London will know that).

Thanks!

 

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