Internship Resume Updated
Based on what you guys commented on, I made the appropriate changes. However it still needs a lot of work. I quantified my bullets, removed high school. Criticisms encouraged.
Hi jcakmac, I took a look at your resume, and I think the descriptions under each of our experience can be improved further. For example, have more points per experience, quantify, etc.
Hope it helps!
So expand them to two bullets each essentially.
If you have time, you should also check out some other people's resumes :) Personally, I thought this one is good (except some minor issues): (WSO URL here) /forums/ib-resume-review-0
Good luck!
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-> dates should line up -> quality over quantity in Activities section -> lots of white space, try to expand horizontally not vertically
The dates should line up at least they do on my copy. I agree with the white space, took this to my schools career center and she spaced it all making all that white space. I'm going to revert it back to the way I had it.
Format is terrible, GPA, remove high school, quantify, add more bullets
it might be hard for you with 3.0GPA to get many looks at IBDs. Consider AM or PWM.
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