Killing tips for my resume! Need help with wording

Hi guys, I have attached t my resume, please tell can someone tell where I can bring some improvements? This one has not been very successful so far and I think the reason is the wording. I do not have IB internship and I am not sure on how effective is the wording I have used to connect the only one I had to the roles I'm applying for (summer IB internship). PS( places have been explicitly hidden) Thanks everyone who will spend some time to criticise it!

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