London Spring Week Resume

Hi guys, I'm trying to get my act together to apply for Spring Weeks right now and would appreciate some feedback on my resume. I don't really want to post publicly as my positions of responsibility are rather hard to anonymise but it would be greatly appreciated if people are happy to review my resume privately please. A bit about me: I'm a second-year(on a four year MSci) STEM student at a target London uni. British, with limited (but far from fluent) Spanish. My academics and extracurriculars are decent but I have no finance experience aside from a week, and a returning three weeks in the summer after I was invited back, at a small petrochemical financial consultancy. Most of the work I did there was on arbitration, including a $500mn claim concerning C.Asian oil fields. Long term I quite fancy the idea of something commodities-y, probably physical (metals or agriculturals) trading, but at this stage I just want to get some experience in a well-known financial institution. Thanks in advance:)