Seems odd to have all that open day experience. I got selected to tons of law firm open days to gain an insight into how the business works but its not on my resume. I suppose you can put some on there or explain it in a cover letter for example but alarm bells would probably ring for someone looking for actual work experience.
Your activities and interests actually reads like work experience so perhaps fix that. I would cut down on the industry stuff (especially the 100 students one, doesnt do anything for you) and perhaps expand on the PR gig you had and put that under work experience. Not the best but I suppose its all you have.
FinancialNoviceIISeems odd to have all that open day experience. I got selected to tons of law firm open days to gain an insight into how the business works but its not on my resume. I suppose you can put some on there or explain it in a cover letter for example but alarm bells would probably ring for someone looking for actual work experience.
Your activities and interests actually reads like work experience so perhaps fix that. I would cut down on the industry stuff (especially the 100 students one, doesnt do anything for you) and perhaps expand on the PR gig you had and put that under work experience. Not the best but I suppose its all you have.
probably put that there since he hasnt had an internship
GPA to tenths place. My rule of thumb: unless you have a 3.95+, don't take it out to the hundredths
Take off "$1,000 Scholarship" and just put the name of the scholarship... should never mention value of financial scholarship unless it's full merit
Industry experience #1, bullet #2: "developed technical understanding of securities trading"? Edit this or get rid of it... doesn't even make sense
What kind of school are you at? Target / nontarget? At first glance, you have way too many workshoppy experiences. Question you might get in interviews: how did you participate in all these sophomore sell days and not land a summer offer?
You should try to land a solid internship this semester
Activities 2-3: quantify and show results
Expound on your online clothing business... how long have you been running it, revenues, etc. This could be a whole section by itself
"Technology industry research" is an interest? Talk about specifics... social media, cloud computing, consumer, etc. Just listing "research" as an interest sounds stupid.
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you have ok "industry" experience but do you have any "work" experience?
Seems odd to have all that open day experience. I got selected to tons of law firm open days to gain an insight into how the business works but its not on my resume. I suppose you can put some on there or explain it in a cover letter for example but alarm bells would probably ring for someone looking for actual work experience.
Your activities and interests actually reads like work experience so perhaps fix that. I would cut down on the industry stuff (especially the 100 students one, doesnt do anything for you) and perhaps expand on the PR gig you had and put that under work experience. Not the best but I suppose its all you have.
probably put that there since he hasnt had an internship
Good luck
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