Need Help/Advice on my resume!! http://www.razume.com/documents/28825
Trying to find my first job after graduation. It's really hard to make a good resume since I don't have that much work experiences. Need advices on resume for a newbie! Thanks a lot!
:( Really hope someone can help me. Give me some advices plz.
WSO Resume Review Score*: 5 (out of 15 possible)
Some explanation of the grading:
1, Wording/Bullets: This score represents the overall wording of the bullets and content throughout the resume. Are there action words? are the experiences explained clearly? Does the candidate quantify their impact where possible?
Layout/Format: This score represents to overall layout and format. Finance professionals are notorious for being anal. Although this score is somewhat subjective, there are certain things we look for including consistency, spacing, clean look, clear sections, proper order, etc.
Overall: This score represents the experiences and school of the candidate and is the hardest to change in the short term. Improving the Wording/Bullets and Layout/Format scores can bump this grade up (usually by 1 grade at most), however, this grade depends largely on the School, GPA, Internships, Leadership, Extracurriculars of the applicant, etc.
We are going to try to provide a candid / direct grading system for as many resumes as we can in this Public Resume Review forum, with the hopes that it will lead candidates that need help on #1. and #2 criteria to consider the WSO Resume Review service that has experienced professionals ready to help bring the #1 and #2 score as close to a 4 or 5 as possible. Due to time contraints, I can't provide more detail and I can only provide this grade to each candidate once (if you try to repost and updated version under a different username, i will recognize it and ignore). What I will say is that if you aren't at a 4 or 5 in Wording and Layout, we can probably help you make significant improvments.
Some more guidelines for total overall score:
3 - 6: Needs MAJOR help / improvements in several areas 7 - 8: Has some major flaws but also has some good areas 9 - 11: An average to slightly above average resume that could still use some help but it is on "ok" shape 12 - 13: A competitive resume that should be able to land some competitive interviews 14 - 15: An impressive resume for on all or almost all levels. Wording/Bullets/Layout/format and overall experience, grades, school, etc are all excellent or very good.
We suggest if you score in the bottom 3 categories listed above that you strongly consider the WSO Resume Review service. Whatever you decide, best of luck!
Thanks, Patrick
Patrick,
Thanks so much, I will consider WSO Resume Review service.
you should work on your formatting. The honors can go below education and you can add relevant coursework to make your resume longer. what is the difference between business experience and work history? I would put them under the same section and label it work experience or something similar. you can have another section for leadership/activities. Also, typically the skill section is usually found at the bottom of a resume.
you indicate you "accomplished in various leadership roles." instead of just writing that, you should be more specific and indicate the leadership role, perhaps have its own section. same with the experience in the various auditing procedures. be as detailed as possible.
Thanks! will work on formatting first!
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