Need to make my resume stand out

Hey everyone!

Here's the deal... I graduated from college last year in December with a B.A. in Marketing and Int'l Business. While I currently have a job, I still continue searching for better opportunities and submit my resume to job openings every once in a while. The problem is that I rarely receive any calls for interviews so I know it has something to do with my resume not being up to par with other applicants. Plus, I have friends in the same field (marketing), who got more calls for interviews although they have less/no work experience.

So please, let me know what can be improved to make it stand out more. I'm also having a hard time shortening it down to only one page.

The formatting came out messed up when I uploaded it, even though it looks fine on word: http://www.razume.com/documents/27464

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Keep it 1 page dude, horrible formatting. There's way too much white space on there and your margins are wider than the line at the top.

Edit: Get rid of that personal objective at the top, it adds nothing to the application and wastes space/makes you look like a tool (no disrespect intended).

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[quote]The HBS guys have MAD SWAGGER. They frequently wear their class jackets to boston bars, strutting and acting like they own the joint. They just ooze success, confidence, swagger, basically attributes of alpha males.[/quote]

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