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For starters, get rid of the objective
formatting all over the place. Suggest you use the m&i template.
im sure you can find someone who will help you not be lonely and also will help you find a job ;P
the majority of that is ALL leadership stuff. you need a JAY OH BEEEEEEEEE. but youre a sophomore... further reiterating my comment about 'dont have to be lonely' :P
Glad you fixed that. I most certainly am not a freshman. I also have a job. In fact, I have three jobs thank you very much, but they are unrelated to finance/business and so they are ultimately unnecessary. Also I'm only lonely because I don't have my dream...job. I'm in love with banking and until we unite, I will continue to be so.
hahaha--especially if you're into "southern style cooking"
Sorry, couldn't help myself. Seriously though, use the M&I template
Actually, your jobs are necessary. I'm sure most would like to see that you work at mcd's rather than be a 'leader' in some bs club.
sorry but to be honest it's not looking too good. you need relevant professional experience. oh and based on the SummerStart and some other aspects of your resume I was able to get a pretty good idea of where you go to school ;) you really need to start networking and i would suggest focusing exclusively on boutiques
M&I template.
Your interests make you sound like a women and gender studies/art history double major.
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